adiwan (adiwan)'s status on Sunday, 01-Nov-15 21:29:09 UTC
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@vcgriffin I have no problem with that but the narrative structure is extremely poor. It has no focus and jumps irratically from scene to scene.
@vcgriffin I have no problem with that but the narrative structure is extremely poor. It has no focus and jumps irratically from scene to scene.