madington flavors (madflavors)'s status on Friday, 25-Nov-11 08:00:55 UTC

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    @tenmihara okay sorry it took a while. I think the Phoenix part is good if only just a bit fast paced. I know it should be though so that's just my opinion. The feral ghoul part and just the hospital in general are good as well. Maybe a bit more description when they first enter so you can really set the eerie mood. That's all I got.

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