Replies to elli, page 50
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@zazie And, has detected herself... RIP In Pony.
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@zazie Oh god damn, you are right!
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@zazie Riley. I nominate you as Substitute Wlecome Poy. NOW TO MAKE YOU A CYBORG NINJA!
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@zazie The artist can be seen in Luna's eyes in that pic if you didn't notice
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@zazie NRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR http://pny.lv/g8h5
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@zazie NRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR http://pny.lv/g8h4
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@zazie Another mOth I hope! http://pny.lv/g8h0
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@zazie H'Yes! LOOK AT THE CUTE LUAN MOTH!
Look at it... http://pny.lv/g8gw
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@zazie Copacetic (Cope- Ah-Set-ik) - In Excellent Order http://pny.lv/g8ft
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@zazie It's so damn cute
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@zazie I am STILL jealous of your avatar.
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@zazie WHAT ELSE IS NICE IS MY LIFE! YEAHHHHHHHHHH! I feel awesome now in comparison to earlier. Hot damn, how are you Riley? Ziley-Phone?
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@zazie Yes it is~~~~
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@zazie I appleING LOVE YOU
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@zazie Yeah, and dialogue can really make or break a narrative, since it's crucial to character construction. Getting to the point where you can write strong, convincing dialogue is when you really get into professional writing.
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@zazie This is true. If I may say I thought you did a pretty decent job though. Obviously it was far from perfect, but none of us are Tennessee Williams the first time we try to write a scene. I'm sure if you wrote more you could develop a really strong technique.
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@zazie That's fair, but you're essentially still establishing context, characters, and thematic grounding and that still takes talent and hard work.
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@zazie Well, you finished a first act.
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@zazie don't lord it over me
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@zazie yes
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@zazie I see what you did there.
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@zazie *Hands you can of Spaghetti-o's, without a Can opener*
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@zazie totally unrelated
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@zazie Yeah, thinking about, but not eating.
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@zazie tru
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@zazie THIS IS NOT TRUE
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@zazie And he also said Collapse
