MetalTao (metaltao)'s status on Friday, 27-Feb-15 04:53:58 UTC

  1. MetalTao MetalTao

    @dibmembrane I have a complaint, the flow from powers to grandparents is a bit on the Wonky side, ideas need to flow from one to the other. You see, you mentioned two things in te first sentence, Explain one at a time, and, explain them chronologically.
    You went from, "I have powers!" And Then wen, "I live with my grandparents." And explained the grandparents lives witjout explaining what came first, the powers.

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