@egnaroesroh
Mililani, Hawaii, USA
Brony who enjoys art, music, video games, anime, fanfiction, and almost anything pony.
I recently finished Case 2 of my first fanfic Twilight Sparkle: Mare Attorney and am now attempting to try my hand at making a game Persona: Pony.
Notices by Michael (egnaroesroh), page 11
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@banditen Dang, that's an awful lot of rest. I think I've gotten twelve hours at the most.
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@ceruleanspark Hmm. Though I only know the basic premise of the job, I figure you'd be able to manage it. Is this just something that she realized she needs or something?
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@ceruleanspark Ah. So how are you doing?
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@ceruleanspark Which would be my normal reaction. Though considering the content, I figured I'd play it safe. Have you tried/played it?
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@ceruleanspark You know, I really don't know how to respond to that especially since it's coming from you.
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@egnaroesroh Actually, I just finished that a few minutes ago in Lilly's path.
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@ceruleanspark Actually yes. Considering the premise of it, it's done in good taste I think and the stories itself are at the least entertaining.
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@pinhooves Good night!
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@ceruleanspark Fine. Playing Katawa Shoujo. Well, I suppose reading is a better term in this case.
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@ceruleanspark Immediately, hi.
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@lyokotravels Night!
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@abigpony I never said he was characterized well, just that some form of attempt was made. I think they relied too much on letting us fill in the known characters' personalities from what we knew so that they didn't have to. Oh well. G'night.
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@pinhooves Ah, merely curious. Didn't want to take up the timeline with blocks of text if it was keeping others from posting.
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Is it seriously only me and @abigpony or does no one wish to talk with the large blocks of text?
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@egnaroesroh Although yes, this is also a problem as well. It's not a good thing when the Gary Stu/self insert of the character is actually the highlight because it shows some development. Which actually explains a lot since this would explain why the main character is the only one who they actually write about in some detail.
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@abigpony Honestly that's the least of their problems, at least he got some characterization. Poor Rainbow Dash go none at all and got less lines than Princess Luna before near the ending.
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@abigpony Hmm, well I personally wouldn't say too sappy, just that the moments where try to convey it they do poorly and are hit and miss. Depending on how you wrote it, maybe that's the better option. A review would probably be taken into consideration more by its author if it points out the issues instead of just, "This is like really, really bad as in super bad."
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@abigpony I suppose writing a review would be a good idea considering it could have been something decent if not great, given help. Playing a game and relaxing mostly since it's getting late.
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@abigpony The biggest letdown is how little you can care about Rainbow Dash at all. The whole separation thing is supposed to be heart breaking, but how can you when all you know about her up till that point is she likes racing. I can't feel bad for someone if I don't feel like I know them. I can't deny that done better, this would legitimately be a sad story, but as it is it comes off as "I have this idea for a story, but I don't have all the details so I'll just give you the main points an you can come up with the details yourself."
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@pinhooves Okay, relaxing for the most part since I've got to do homework tomorrow.
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Hey all, how's it going?
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@abigpony I still can't understand why it's lauded as amazing and 6 is six starred. For being a RD story, she gets probably less than a page of dialogue and her characterization isn't really there at all. The one conflict in the entire story is done badly and makes the whole problem seem like they got insanely mad over just spilling a drink.
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Well, I guess it's time to go. I've got to wake up in about 5 hours, so I need to get some sleep. G'night all!
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@internetmanchild Thats what I use. It works well enough I guess.
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@macksmith @ceruleanspark #spammer #doievenneedtobother? (Still posted for effect)
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@twinarmageddons This is the first time I've heard this. This is funny now that I am aware of this.
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@ceruleanspark I am sleep deprived, it is 1:28 in the morning, and I am trying to solve the equation of a circle and graph it. There we go.
